This got dark very quickly and suddenly…I like it.
I love how she’s just randomly riding on his back.You could have told him this earlier!Is that her blood?Wait! Did that just go through her?! Is she dead? Whats happening?!Is she dead?! Also I do like how they both still can’t see the Hollow despite being attacked by one.So she can sort of see it now, why? Because its nearing her death or something? And this is definitely creepy as hell.I thought you were dead, what? Didn’t the Hollow stab you through? I mean I don’t want you to be dead but I don’t see how you survived that. Unless your a spirit now?You are a spirit! Wow! I didn’t think they’d go that far! I thought she was a important character! Unless she sticks around after? Though I don’t see why she won’t go to the soul society straight away once they find her. Also why isn’t the Hollow going for her?You’re still sane and not trying to eat her? I’m confused. If you’re sane enough not to eat and attack her then why are you attacking her friend? Unless you wanted her to join you as a Hollow maybe? Some twisted love like that?She’ll think she’s having a fantasy dream instead, haha. Her crush coming to save her, lol. Knight in shining armour, apart from him being to late and you already being dead part, but apart from that.He’s going to realise he was to late…uh oh…You might be a bit more positive about killing him now.He looks like he has a human heart to me.And here I thought Hollows were insane. This is getting grayer by the second if a lot of them still retain parts of their humanity.Is more of his humanity coming back? Or will it set him off?Okay we get it! Do something!I’m freaking shocked. I didn’t think it go there, will this be enough to knock him back to his senses?Oh!So does that mean there might be a chance to save him?This is making a little more sense to me, okay.Wait, save her as in bring her back to life? Or say her as in wake up up so she’s not unconscious anymore?Aw, she still remembers you dude!Ah, that sounds a little better.This isn’t bringing me to tears or anything but I can appreciate the moment.This is a interesting end to a Hollow, I bet we won’t see it that often.Oh so she isn’t dead! But I thought she was a spirit? How is she not a spirit anymore? I thought her brother like stabbed her right through?!Okay so thats how the memory thing works, I don’t really care about that, how about you explain how she is still alive?! And how you got her back into her body?! I swear I thought she was dead!That works! A compromise works!So thats how we’re ending? I hope her being revived or whatever is explained in the future!
Last Sentence Take Away: How is she not a spirit anymore?! Tell me??
Ah, thank you for clearing that up, I just assumed as she was out of her body she was dead and didn’t really think about the chain as much as I should have, thank you
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Her chain wasn’t broken so technically she wasn’t dead, just removed from her body. Put her back in and all good. (Bleach logic.)
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Ah, thank you for clearing that up, I just assumed as she was out of her body she was dead and didn’t really think about the chain as much as I should have, thank you
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